Band 5.0 Sample: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The representative bar chart provides the information about the numbers of Japanese travellers visiting abroad from 1985 to 1995. While, the graph illustrates the Australia’ share of Japan’s tourist market.
Overall Statement:
A glance is enough to make it clear that the numbers of Japanese tourists travelling abroad had increased gradually throughout ten years. Meanwhile, that same trend followed in certain years in share market graph, where Australia gained the percentage from Japan’s tourist market with passage of year.
Body Paragraph 1:
Coming to details, in 1985, the numbers of travelers were below 6millions. After that, for upcoming five years, the statics had increased constantly and in 1990, the numbers crossed the milestone of 10 million tourists. Additionally, Japan earned the highest numbers of travelers in 1995 with above 14 million.
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On the other hand, the earning from share market was at 2% for Australia from Japan’s tourist market. There was gradual increment in percentage in 80’s and some year of 90’s. Also, Australia had fluctuation in proportions from 1987 to 1989. But, from1989, Australia earned consistantly from Japan’s tourist market. Plus, they gained more than 6% shares in 1993.
Band 5.0 Sample: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.