Band 6.5 Sample: The maps below show the village of Stoke ford in 1930 and 2010.
Paragraphing Statement:
The given maps demonstrate the plan of the village of stoke ford in the year of 1930 and 2010.
Overall Statement:
Over all, it is quite apparent that, there were more farmlands in 1930 as compared to 2010. While, the number of houses increased and almost no was there farmland in 2010.
Body Paragraph 1:
Moving on the details, the bridge remained same in 1930 and 2010. However, there were new housing plans in 2010. Moreover, the shops on the west side of the lane were replaced by an extension of the lane towards and the west and new houses. Furthermore, the farmland on the north-east side of the primary school in 1930 had been replaced by an extension of lane towards the east and new houses. The post office remained the same in 2010 as in 1930. The primary school was extended in 2010.
Body Paragraph 2:
Moreover, the large house in 1930 had been expanded and replaced by a retirement home in 2010. The gardens near the large house in 1930 had been reduced in area making more place for new housing. There were new housing plans on both sides of the lane in 2010. Moreover, the farmland on the south-west side of large house in 1930 was replaced for the construction of new lane and houses.
Band 6.5 Sample: The maps below show the village of Stoke ford in 1930 and 2010.