Band 5.5 Sample: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city centre from 2003-2012.

Band 5.5 Sample: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city centre from 2003-2012.

Paraphrasing Statement:

The given line graph illustrates the crime changes that took place in Newport city center from 2003 to 2013 in their areas of burglary, car theft and robbery ( theft from the person).

Overall Statement:

Overall it is clearly visible that, there was not much increase in the robbery for the past ten years. There was a sharp decline in burglary from 2004 to 2008.

Body Paragraph 1:

On coming to details, in 2003 there was 600 incidents related to robbery. And in 2005 it rose up to 900 incidents of robbery.  But after 2005 it slowly steadily to go down till 2008 where only 500 incidents of robbery planned. And then again it increase up to 700 incidents in 2010 and then it return low up to 600 incidents of robbery in 2012. In 2003 there was about 3400 incidents of burglary. In the span of one year it increased up to 3700 ( approx.) incidents in 2004. But after 2004, the cases of burglary steadily decrease.

Body Paragraph 2:

On moving further, after 2004 there was decrease in the crime rate of burglary in Newport city center . But in 2008, it again starts to rise from 1200 ( approx.) incidents . But it remains stable for 4 years to 1400-1300 incidents of burglary. There was about 2800 incidents of car theft in 2003. It remain stable for few years and then it decline to 2100 ( Approx.)  incidents of car theft in 2006. After that there was slight change the numbers of crime cases of car theft up to 2009. After that the incident of car theft were 2800 in 2012.

Band 5.5 Sample: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city centre from 2003-2012.

Band 5.0 Sample: The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats)of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.

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