Band 7.0 Sample: The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The given maps illustrate an island’s natural structure before and after the building of some tourist facilities on the island.
Overview:
Overall, it is quite apparent that, after the tourists facilities were built, there were numerous accommodations, a reception, a restaurant and a pier on the island. The structure of island had a drastic change after these facilities were built as compared to before.
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Moving on the details, there was some plantation in the west of the island before the construction of buildings and a beach to the west of the island. After the construction of the facilities, the trees and the beach remained same. However, there was an additional swimming area to the west of the beach. There was a circular foot path around the trees and 6 accommodations. There was a reception area surrounded by a vehicle track in the center of an island.
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Furthermore, there was more natural plantation to the east to the island before the construction. However, after construction there were 9 accommodations with circular footpath alongside the plants. There was a new restaurant in north of the island and a new pier and ships in the sea to the south of the island. There were also some additional plants to the west of the island.
Band 7.0 Sample: The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.