Band 5.5 Sample: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The charts given illustrate the number to Japanese who traveled to foreign countries from 1985 to 1995 and share of Australia from Japanese tourist market.
Overall Statement:
Overall, it is quite apparent that the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad and Australia’s share of Japan’s market increased from the initial year to final year.
Body Paragraph 1:
Coming to the details, in the bar graph it is shown that the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad increased gradually. In the year 1985, it was approximately 5 million. And it constantly increased till 1990 up to 11 million. Then a downfall could be seen and it went slight below 11 million. Then in 1992 and 1993 it was almost at 12 million. Then in the last year of 1995 it reached to 15 million.
Body Paragraph 2:
In the line graph a gradually increase was there, in spite of some fluctuations. In the starting year 1985, it had increased to 2% from its origin. Then from 1885 to 1988 it had constantly increased and reached up to 5%. Then in 1989 it was again 4%. From 1989 to 1993 it constantly increased and reached above the percentage of 6%. In 1994 it was 6%.
Band 5.5 Sample: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.