Band 5.5 Sample: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

Paraphrasing Statement:

The given graph elaborates the unemployment  rates  in the US and Japan between march 1993 and march 1999.

Overall Statement:

Overall, it is clearly visible that the percentage of workforce in US was higher. While, the percentage of workforce in Japan was least. Workforce of both the nations were same at the end of period.

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On coming to the details, the workforce of Japan in the year march 1993 was 2.5%. The percentage of workforce in Japan rose up to 3.6% in the year 1994 march. After the variation the percentage of workforce still remained same in the year 1995 as 3.5%. Then the percentage of workforce showed a highly increased and reached up to 4.4% in the year of march 1996. Moreover, with slightly variation in the year 1997, the percentage of workforce rose up to 51% in the year 1998 and in the year 1999 also.

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Moving towards the remaining details, the percentage of US workforce was at 7% in the initial year that is march 1993. The workforce showed  a decrease in the year march 1994 and reached to 6%. After that, in the year 1995 the percentage of workforce in US was reached to 5.5%. Moreover, the percentage of workforce in the year march 1996 was remained same that is 5.5%. Furthermore, with the variation the workforce reached to 5% in the year 1998, march. At the end, the workforce of US was reached to the same level of 5% in the year 1999 as in the year 1998.

Band 5.5 Sample: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

Band 6 Sample: The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond.