Band 6.0 Sample: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Introductory Statement:
Some individuals think that it is best to accept a bad condition like an unsatisfactory job or lack of money while, others think that it is good to try and improve such conditions. In the following paragraph this essay will firstly discuss that accepting an unsatisfactory job can provide income to the people and secondly if people try to push their limits to improve their conditions they can have better lifestyle and opportunities.
Body Paragraph 1:
Nowadays, due to ever-increasing population, many people are facing problems like unemployment, lack of money, poverty etc. Due to this, people are enforced to do the jobs which they do not want to. Some people think that it is good to accept these condition as it can provide a source of money to the people. They can fulfill their daily needs. Because something is better than nothing. By doing unsatisfactory jobs people can at least support themselves in the bad times. For example, an article was published by the newspaper ‘ The Hindustan times’ which stated that 30% of the people are doing unsatisfactory jobs but at least they are having a source of money to overcome the bad time.
Body Paragraph 2:
On the other hand, some people think that people should try hard and improvise their condition. They should try to find better jobs according to their capabilities. So that they can have good wages for better life style. People should not compromise with their inner happiness. They can have better facilities and options if they try to push their limitations and try to improve their situation. For example, a survey was conducted by an NGO named ‘Little Hearts’ according to which 20% of people tried to work out of their comfort zone and succeeded to get a better lifestyle.
Conclusion:
To conclude this, people should accept their situation as it can provide them a source of income in their bad times but at the same time they should try to push their limits to get better jobs for betterment for life.
Band 6.0 Sample: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.