Band 6.5 Sample: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The given line graph demonstrates the changes that occurred in three various types of crime in Newport city center from 2003 to 2012.
Overview:
Overall, it is quite visible that, rate of robbery remained almost same from the initial year to the final year. The crime rate of burglary had a steep fall from the initial year and then remained almost constant to the final year. And the rate of car theft of fluctuating but remained nearly same in the initial and the final year.
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Moving on to the details, the rate of robbery remained almost same from 2003 to 2012. In the starting year of 2003, the rate of robbery was approximately 700 and it reached slightly more in 2004 that was 300. The rate of robbery remained same in 2005 and decreased to nearly 300 in 2007. In the year of 2008 the rate of robbery was 500 and it reached to nearly 200 in 2011. The robbery rate ended up at 300 in 2012. Whereas, the rate of car theft was approximately 2700 in the starting year of 2003. It remained same until 2005 and then decreased to 2500 in 2006. The rate of car theft was nearly same 2500 in 2006. The rate of car theft was nearly same in the years 2007,2008 and 2009.
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The rate of car theft increased in the year of 2010 to 2700 and ended up to 2900 in final year of 2012. The rate of burglary had drastic changes from the initial year to the final year. It was 3400 in 2003 and increased to 4300 in the year of 2004. The rate of car theft had a drastic fall and reached nearly 1100 in the year of 2008. Then it increased to nearly 1400 in 2009 and remained same with slight changes till final year. The rate was slightly above the 1300 in 2012.
Band 6.5 Sample: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.