Band 7 Sample: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The line graph depicts the information about the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during the year of 2014.
Overview:
Overall, it is clearly seen that, the maximum fluctuation was in the prices of nickel. However, zinc and copper showed minimum fluctuation in the changes of prices trough out the time period.
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To begin with, in the year 2014, the prices of nickel had been changed by 6% in January as compared to previous month. However, changes in price declined dramatically till the month of March at stood at 1% in changes compared to previous month. In June, the change in the prices of nickel was again decreased up to 3%. While it increased by 1% in change of prices in July and remained constant till September. After some fluctuation the change in prices was stood at 1% in December as compared to previous month. The change in prices of zinc was 1% in January as compared to previous month. However, in the month of February, the change in its prices had been increased up to 3%.
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Turning to the remaining details, the change in prices of zinc was 1% in January as compared to previous month. However, in the month of February, the change in its prices had been increased up to 3%. After this the change in the prices of zinc was decreased dramatically till the month of June by 1% as compared to previous month and remained stable till the month of October. By the end of December the change in its prices increased by 1% as compared to previous month. Lastly, the change in the prices of copper was 2% in January as compared to its previous month. After this it decreased till the month of June and remained approximately stable by around 1% of change. However, by the end of the month of December the change of prices of copper was increased and stood around at 2% as compared to previous month.
Band 7 Sample: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.