Band 5.5 Sample: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The three pie charts given below demonstrate the alterations of spending done by a school in UK in three particular years 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall Statement:
Overall, it is quite apparent that the school spent the most on staff member’s salary. Whereas, they spent least on insurance and other expenditures fluctuated.
Body Paragraph 1:
Turning to the details, in 1981, the school had spent 40% on teacher’s salary which was lowest in comparison to other charts. They spent 45% in 2001 and 50% in 1991 which is the highest on teacher’s salary. Expenditure on insurance has been increased in 1981 it was 2%, 1991 it was 3% and 8% in 2001.
Body Paragraph 2:
Moving towards the other expenditures, the salary of non- teaching staff decreased from 28% to 22% and then to 15%. Expenditure on resources and furniture and were fluctuating 15% in 1981 , 20% in 1991 and 9% in 1981. And about furniture and equipment school spent 15% in 1981, 5% in 1991 and 23% in 2001.
Band 5.5 Sample: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.