Band 6.5 Sample: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The two maps demonstrates the approach to a city hospital via road in year 2007 and 2010.
Overall Statement:
Overall it is quite apparent that the road developed more in 2010 as compared to 2007. There were new bus station separate car park of public and staff etc.
Body Paragraph 1:
Moving on to the details, in 2007 there was a straight hospital road joining the ring road around the hospital and the main city road. There were six bus stops on the hospital road, three on each side of the road of the road. Where as in 2010 there were two additional round abouts on the hospital road. One on the north side joining, the ring road and second on the south side joining the city road.
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In the year 2007, there was a joint car parking for both staff and public on the east side of the hospital road, where by in the year 2010, there were no separate bus stops but a bus station on the west side of the hospital road. The bus station was conjoint with both the round abouts via road. There was a separate car parking for both the staff and the public. The public car parking was on the east side of ring road and staff car parking was on the east of the hospital road.
Band 6.5 Sample: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.