Band 6 Sample: The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Paraphrasing Statement:
The given pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 for retail sections.
Overall Statement:
Overall, it is clearly seen that, there are four factors that use online shopping for retail sector. Travelling and film cover bigger section in 2003 and 2013 respectively.
Body Paragraph 1:
On coming to details, in 2003 travelling covers 36% in the online sales for retail sections in New Zealand. After travelling, online shopping was mostly used for buying clothes up to 24 %.Then online shopping sales for books was 19% for retail sector in New Zealand. At last with 21% films or music has online sale for retail sector in New Zealand .
Body Paragraph 2:
On moving further, in 2013 the online shopping sales for retail sector in film up to 33% in New Zealand. After that travel cover 29% in online shopping sales. Then online sales for retail sector in clothes was 16%. At last books covers 22% in the online shopping sales for retail sections in New Zealand in 2013.
Band 6 Sample: The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.