Band 7.0 Sample: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Introductory Statement:
Many governments believe that economic growth is their top most priority. However, some individuals think that there are other kinds of progresses which hold an equal importance for the development of a country. In the following paragraph this essay will firstly discuss that economic growth is can improvise the financial status of every strata of society and secondly, that other type of progresses are important for the overall development of the country.
Body Paragraph 1:
To begin with, talking about the former statement, according to government, economic progress should be considered most important, as it can provide financial stability to each and every individual of the society. Individuals can fulfill their dreams. It gives freedom and essence of independent to the citizen of country. Every one can have a desired lifestyle. There can be less number of people, who are dependent on either government or upper class society was published by ‘ the Hindustan times’ newspaper of 2021, according to which economic growth is much needed for the development of an individual as well as whole country.
Body Paragraph 2:
However, there are other types of progress, which are essential for the over all growth of a country. Political progress, social progress along with the economic progress can lead to a development of a country. The absence of political and social progress can create a void between societies as well as countries. The lead factor of this situation will be discrimination as the basic of equality rights, caste, job opportunities etc. So all the types of factory should be considered to bind a country a nation, so that the country can develop in every sector. For example an article was published in the ‘The Times Now’ newspaper according to which, economic progress can give an individual financial freedom but social and political progress will an individual equal opportunities in a society.
Conclusion:
To conclude this, progress is very important for an individual and a country as it can provide freedom and financial independence to each and every citizen. But other factors like social and political progress are equally important for the all over development of a country.
Band 7.0 Sample: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.