Band 9 Sample: Development should not be meant for only mankind rather it must be aimed to uplift the whole ecosystem. What will be the problems and solutions for it?

Band 9 Sample: Development should not be meant for only mankind rather it must be aimed to uplift the whole ecosystem. What will be the problems and solutions for it?

Introductory Statement:

Mankind has been focusing on its own growth. And it has converged on its own development, leaving the entire Biodiversity deprived of the nourishment and development. This essay will unthread some of the dangers that it poses like global warming and extinction of important species. Moreover, it will shed some possible solutions like awareness towards renewable energy sources.

Body Paragraph 1:

Climate change is occurring due to excess and mindless pollution from industrial development. And it has given birth to global warming which in turn melts the glaciers. Which are holding the gun on entire life as we all know. Moreover, the temperature change of poles and addition of melted ice in oceanic water has reduced the salinity of water. Which has made the ecosystem unsafe for many species of fishes and penguins alike. The imbalance thus created has a long-term effect which the scientists are now discovering. An award winning Discovery Channel documentary ‘Planet Earth’ showed how the decrease in number of fishes at poles has caused the corruption in food chain thus adversely effecting the supply of seafood.

Body Paragraph 2:

Several recoveries and repairements are being debated and thoroughly discussed. Depending on renewable energy solutions like Solar panels, wind-turbines seems to be the need of the hour. Opposite to the coal and wood which contributes majorly as fuel sources in factories. Same energy sources can be used as the power source for cars hence reducing the air pollution. This will give a fresh air to the ecosystem to flourish. Moreover, it will create suitable environment for the biological life to develop and evolve at its natural pace. Recent lock-downs during Covid showed plainly how the reduction in cars on road and shutdown of industrial work cleaned the environment, which was one of the few drops in the bucket towards ecological development.

Conclusion:

In conclusion, development of mankind has been an entirely selfish act which has caused unrelenting problems causing a drastic effect in the development of the ecosystem. There is a need of a rational and updated scientific methods to tackle the problem and clean energy is just one of the few right steps that must be taken at wide-scale.

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