Band 6 Sample: The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

Band 6 Sample: The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

Paraphrasing Statement:

The provided bar graph illustrates the information of one country about how families spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Overall Statement:

Overall, it is clearly mentioned that average weekly spending by families in 1968 was more on food. And in 2018 it was more on leisure.

Body Paragraph 1:

On coming to details, in 1968 the average weekly spending by families in one country was 9% in leisure and in 2018 it increased to 22% then in 1968 families in one country spent 8% of weekly income on transport. In 2018 the spending on transport was 14% by families. In 1968, expenditure on personal goods by families was 8% of weekly income and in 2018 it was 4%. Families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 on household goods was 8% (approx.) and this percentage rate remain same in 2018 too.

Body Paragraph 2:

On moving further, average weekly spending by families on clothes and footwear in 1968 was 10%. In 2018 it falls to 5%. The spending of weekly income by families in 1968 on fuel and power was 6% only. Whereas, in 2018 the expenditure on fuel and power was 4%. The housing expenditure of families in 1968 was 10 %  and in 2018 it rises t 19%. Families in one country spending their weekly income on food in 1968 was 35%. In 2018, spending on food by families was 17% of their weekly income.

Band 6 Sample: The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

Band 5.5 Sample: The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.

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